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“Why can’t Johnny write? He sounds okay!” Attending to form in English second language teachin

Dr Diana Ayliff

Department of Applied Language Studies, Nelson Mandela Metropolitan University, Port Elizabeth

diana.ayliff@nmmu.ac.za

Keywords: English second language, communicative language teaching, form-focused instruction

Introduction

In South Africa there are many learners and tertiary students who are in a similar position to our metaphorical “Johnny”. While Johnny “sounds okay”, the apparently fluent spoken variety of his discourse is not matched by his written variety. This perception that his speech is competent is probably due to the fact that during linguistic interaction in his second language (L2), he is using short utterances (shorter than a sentence) and behavioural gestures and facial expressions — or those aspects of his communication that fall into the pragmatic and paralinguistic domains — to compensate for his ill-formed utterances. His interlocutor, especially if she is an educator and Johnny a learner, often becomes a conspirator in this deception and colludes with him in the interests of social equanimity. The educator-participant might compensate for his deviant utterances by filling in the omissions of information in his discourse because of shared knowledge and the wish to maintain mutual communication. Johnny’s perception that his second language is good is thus reinforced and he is surprised when his written discourse is rejected because it lacks well-formed sentences. To use Cummins’s terms (1980), Johnny has acquired basic interpersonal communicative skills (BICS), but not cognitive/academic language proficiency (CALP).

Thus Johnny “sounds okay”, but his written discourse is so poor that it has unleashed a plethora of criticism. This criticism ranges from letters to the editors of the popular press to official international reports that South African learners rank near the bottom on various tests. The Southern and Eastern African Consortium for Monitoring Educational Quality (SACMEQ, 2008)[1] showed that about half of our grade-6 learners could not comprehend a standard, age-appropriate text, while South Africa is one of the twenty countries considered below standard by the Education for All (EFA, 2008)[2] global report commissioned by UNESCO. The dismal situation is acknowledged in speeches by Ministers of Education (Motshekga, 2009; Pandor, 2005[3]) while a draft report by the National Benchmark Tests Project (2009)[4] produced for the vice-chancellors’ association of Higher Education South Africa (HESA) revealed that the majority of first year students do not have the required academic literacy skills to cope at university without support.

Many of these students are what Cross has called “new students” who are unable to “express their own system of values and express themselves in the mother tongue” (Cross, 2009:15). Tertiary institutions respond to this lack of literacy and written skills in the language of learning and teaching (LOLT) by pouring more and more money into development programmes, and academics research the phenomenon and write up their findings in papers exploring “academic literacy” and “language of academic purposes” such as those by Ferreira and Mendelowitz (2009), Uys et al. (2007) and van Rooyen and Jordaan (2009). In short, Johnny has been taught to express himself, albeit inaccurately, in spoken, but not written discourse.

Why has Johnny not been taught to write?

The reasons Johnny has not been taught to write with accuracy are complex and involve multiple challenges found in our schools and communities; however, three crucial reasons explored in this article are OBE, the way English as FAL is taught and the teaching corps which is expected to teach it.

Outcomes-based Education

The Outcomes-based Education policy (OBE), introduced by Professor Bengu in 1998, has probably had unintended consequences. It has become the whipping-boy for many of the woes of the education system, (Bloch, 2009; Olivier, 2009[5]), but is probably not the problem in itself. It is an imported system that might work well in first-world countries like the United States of America, Canada and the United Kingdom. According to the Department of Education National Curriculum Statement (NCS) for Grades 10-12, First Additional Language (FAL) is characterised by a “learner-centred and activity-based approach” (2) that encourages both independence and group work where learners use resources such as the internet, databases, libraries and laboratories to self-discover and learn. While this is sound educational policy, it is very difficult to implement in rural and township schools because many function without libraries, the Internet or even electricity.

To compound these problems the NCSs that are founded on OBE are couched in language that is relatively difficult to penetrate as OBE-specific jargon is used.

Integration and applied competence

Integration is achieved within and across subjects and fields of learning. The integration of knowledge and skills across subjects and terrains of practice is crucial for achieving applied competence as defined in the National Qualifications Framework. Applied competence aims at integrating three discrete competences. (NCS Grades 10-12, Home Language, 3)

As Blignaut (2007:49) points out, it is “difficult to translate policy into practice”, and to implement a curriculum that is so alien to the average South African teacher’s epistemological understanding and pedagogical practice is to court disaster. I concur with Blignaut that policymakers must begin “where the teachers are” (Blignaut, 2007:55) and I suggest that they be offered a methodical syllabus reflecting the linguistic forms of English that will lead to their learners mastering accurate written discourse in that language. While OBE might work successfully in first-world countries where the numbers in the classes are relative small, schools are well resourced and teachers well qualified, it is less likely to be successful in South Africa where the opposite is often the case.

The way English-FAL is taught

For many years now second-language learners of English have been taught through a communicative meaning-based approach. This communicative approach is not unique to South Africa, but has been a trend across the world since the 1960s. The assumption, however, that a communicative meaning-based approach to teaching an L2 leads to levels of grammatical accuracy and fluent written competence has not materialised.  Some thirty years of using this kind of methodology in South Africa has exploded this myth.

The NCS for English-FAL is based on a communicative or meaning-focused approach to language teaching. This method involves language teachers having to direct their learners to the meaning of the discourse in the belief that the form, including the grammar, vocabulary, spelling, and pronunciation will be acquired almost unconsciously. This method of instruction is modelled on the idea that the acquisition of an L2 is much the same process as that of an L1 where a child simply picks up the language in a seemingly effortless way while exploring and concentrating on the world around him or her.

It was argued during the 1970s and 1980s (Widdowson, 1978; Brumfit, 1984) that if children acquired their L1 by interacting with others, then by reproducing those natural conditions in the classroom, learners of L2s would acquire that language too, notwithstanding the difference in age between L1 acquisition and L2 learning. Learning, it was believed, should take place in a meaning-focused environment in which learners negotiate meaning when a gap in understanding occurs. Genuine message-focused language use should lead to language acquisition when learners participate in role-play and simulation exercises, where the message is paramount and some learners, who have the knowledge, are able to fill the information gaps of others, who lack the knowledge, by exchanging genuine messages. It was hoped that the real world of communication would thus be transplanted into the classroom. The role of the teacher in this kind of classroom is that of a supporter of the learner, who takes control of her learning and, in theory, progresses steadily along the natural route of language development (Krashen, 1985) unaffected by intrusive instruction.

It is now accepted by many researchers (e.g. Day and Shapton, 1991; Harley, 1989; Lyster, 1994; Schmidt, 1983; Spada, 1997) that while meaning-focused instruction leads to confident and apparently fluent speakers of an L2, it does not result in accuracy. Ellis, Loewen and Basturkmen (2003:151), for instance, comment that meaning-focused instruction “is not successful in enabling learners to achieve high levels of linguistic and sociolinguistic accuracy” while Laufer (2005:223) writes that the “realization by applied linguists that second language learners cannot achieve high levels of grammatical competence from entirely meaning centred instruction has led them to propose that learners need to focus on form”.

The whole thrust of the section Content and Contexts for the Attainment of Assessment Standards found in the NCS for FAL on page 47 is towards a hands-on, active approach to language learning that is “embedded in situations which are meaningful to learners and so assist learning and teaching”. In addition, while teachers are encouraged to use a wide range of texts that include visual, oral and written forms, they are also expected to encourage their learners to learn their FAL in a “natural, informal process carried over into the classroom where literacy skills of reading/viewing and writing/presenting are learned in a ‘natural’ way — learners read by doing a great deal of reading and learn to write by doing much writing”.

These goals are there to promote high standards that are spelled out in the section on Language levels (NCS for HL:11). There it is stated that the FAL should be of such a standard that it may be used as the language of learning:

Learning Outcomes for the First Additional Languages provide for levels of language proficiency that meet the threshold levels necessary for effective learning across the curriculum, as learners may learn through the medium of their First Additional Language in the South African context. (NCS for FAL:11)

So, while teachers are encouraged to use a communicative meaning-focused approach, they are also expected to raise the level their learners achieve in their FAL to one that is acceptable at a formal academic level.

Certainly, the way the communicative meaning-focused approach has been applied in South Africa has generally not produced high levels of grammatical competence, nor has it produced learners who are able to operate in a cognitively demanding academic domain in their FAL. This is a serious situation since English is the de facto lingua franca of South Africa and the language of learning in most tertiary institutions and schools. Despite the movement amongst some academics (Webb, 2004; Prinsloo, 2007) to convince the language policy makers and parents of school-going learners that the mother-tongue should be the language of learning for as long as possible, English remains dominant.

The teaching corps

South African teachers, especially those in rural areas and townships, are faced with multiple challenges. These have been explored by many, for example, Chrisholm (2005), Knowles, Nieuwenhuis and Smit (2009), and Nel and Theron (2008) and are well documented. They include problems within schools, such as large numbers of learners in classes, ill-discipline, lack of resources, and administration overload for teachers. These problems are partly caused and certainly exacerbated by conditions external to the schools, such as poor socio-economic conditions, unsupportive and illiterate parents or caregivers, dysfunctional home environments, and historical and political challenges. Given these overwhelming odds it is hardly surprising that some teachers are apathetic and unenthusiastic about their profession.

These challenges have resulted in stressed teachers who lack accountability. Steyn and Kamper (2006) give an overview of stress amongst South African teachers and cite various studies that show the high number of teachers (up to 20% in some regions of South Africa) who suffer from severe stress. The cumulative effect of these challenges has resulted in teacher and learner absenteeism, a lack in the culture of teaching and learning and a dearth of professional pride on the part of the teachers in some areas.

Quo vadis?

Given this scenario it is hardly surprising that “Johnny can’t write”. The problems are multiple; however, part of the solution involves changing the meaning-focused communicative curriculum in English FAL to one that focuses on the form of the language. This will help to support our overworked and stressed teachers by giving them a curriculum that is easier to implement, in that it is more methodical than the free-for-all environment in which the teacher is encouraged to collude with the learner in a conspiracy that accurate communication has been achieved.

What is form-focused instruction?

Form-focused instruction refers to any deliberate concentration on syntactic or morphological aspects of language by learners or by the teacher. Attention is drawn to the form of the language, rather than the meaning alone. This distinction is a matter of degree rather than an absolute, as linguistic forms are used to convey meaning. While at one end of the continuum linguistic forms may be taught as discrete linguistic structures in separate lessons, at the other end of the continuum there is a focus on form approach in which structures are dealt with incidentally, during the course of a lesson that is primarily directed to communicating the lesson content.

Form-focused instruction has its roots going back to a paper (unpublished in its original form) presented by Long at the 1988 European-North-American Symposium on Needed Research in Foreign Language Education, Rockefeller Centre, Bellaggio, Italy. A decade later he, in collaboration with Robinson, wrote:

Focus on form refers to how focal attentional resources are allocated. Although there are degrees of attention, and although attention and attention to meaning are not always mutually exclusive, during an otherwise meaning-focused classroom lesson, focus on form often consists of an occasional shift of attention to linguistic code features — by the teacher and/or one or more students — triggered by perceived problems with comprehension or production. (Long & Robinson, 1998:23)

Long and Robinson, then, see the focus on form to be a temporary side-stepping from the important business of the lesson, which is the meaning and the communication of that meaning. Although they do say in the above extract that “attention and attention to meaning are not always mutually exclusive”, there seems to be the perception that the linguistic form can be separated from the meaning. While the learner’s attention is taken up by the lesson content there might be an occasional, and fairly fleeting, detour to focus on a feature such as the plural -s that the teacher notices is missing from a learner’s interlanguage while the class is concentrating on a lesson on South African geography.

These incidental foci on form occurrences are the implied approach laid down in the NCS for FAL:

Thus, in a text-based approach, language is always explored in texts, and texts are explored in relation to their contexts. The approach involves attention to formal aspects of language (grammar and vocabulary) but as choices in texts and in terms of their effects, not in an isolated way. (NCS for FAL:47)

This approach can include a range of teaching techniques such as recasts by the teacher, a simple indication that something is incorrect, to more explicit techniques such as rule explanations and examples.

The problem with this incidental focus on form occurrence is that the learners’ concentration is redirected from the lesson content to an aspect of linguistic form and he might not have the capacity to process both simultaneously. He will therefore probably choose to concentrate only on the one which he perceives as the most pressing at the time, and this will probably be the meaning whether it is the meaning of a line of poetry or how to set out at formal letter. In the lower grades, where the same teacher takes the class for most learning areas, it might be a mathematical problem or how plant species cross-pollinate. The learner, who is trying to cope with the lesson content in his additional language, is now also asked to process new information about linguistic form.

The teacher will also need to make a quick decision as to whether to divert from the meaning-focused content of the lesson to deal with a question of linguistic form. She must weigh up whether she has sufficient examples for the form, a succinct and clear enough explanation to hold the class’s concentration, the time to discuss the form and whether there are sufficient numbers in the class who need the tuition on this point of grammar. It would seem that in the average South African classroom, where the language of learning is not the home language of the majority of the learners, the lesson content will take priority every time.

The NCS for FAL (grades 10-12) lays down that learners are expected to understand how “texts are constructed” and “need to be able to interpret and respond to produce a range of different genres” (DoE, 2003[aa1] b:47). They are also expected to have a “meta-language” to “describe different aspects of grammar, vocabulary and style, [so that they may] talk about different genres”. So while teachers are exhorted to teach in a manner that is close to the focus on form end of the continuum, they are also expected to produce learners, who are able to employ the terms used to describe grammatical concepts, types of style and literary conventions. These high ideals are laudable, but they are far from the reality attained by the majority of those who have passed the matriculation examination.

If learners are to succeed in mastering these abstract concepts in their FAL, it is important that the teachers are given a curriculum that encourages attention to the form of the language. South Africa needs a curriculum that promotes a more structured and logically paced method of instruction in English as FAL to ensure that as many of the major linguistic structures (tenses, sentence types, prefixes, punctuation marks) are covered in an age-appropriate way. This would provide the more balanced curriculum that de Clercq discusses in her article in Perspectives in Education (2008). It would be a support intervention targeted at giving teachers a curriculum that provides a framework of which linguistic forms to teach. These language activities must be complemented by plenty of practice in listening, speaking, reading, and writing in a variety of domains. Such a curriculum would provide for a mix of form-focused and meaning-focused methods of instruction that promote both accuracy and creativity.

Has the focus on form approach been tried and tested?

The body of research that began in the late 1980s interrogating this approach is now considerable and the debate has moved from whether to use a form-focused approach in L2 teaching, to how it should be implemented. Theoretical issues such as the importance of “noticing” and the “teachability hypothesis” underpin whether a reactive versus a proactive focus on form approach should be used, and how explicit the instruction should be.

Noticing is important because the learners should recognise when their output is non-target-like. Schmidt (1995) hypothesises that there is no learning without understanding and he claims that there is no understanding without noticing. He defines noticing as implying a “recognition of a general principle, rule or pattern”, while “understanding refers to a deeper level of abstraction related to (semantic, syntactic, or communicative) meaning” (Schmidt, 1995:29).

Pienemann’s teachability hypothesis (1985) claims that learners can be speeded up if they are taught at the stage just beyond their current stage. The difficulty with this hypothesis is that the research is at too early a stage to predict exactly which of the multitude of structures in all the human languages follows which. There is an intuitive, common sense reasoning, however, that militates against attempting to teach forms that are way beyond the learner’s stage of interlanguage development.

While most researchers have recommended that form-focused instruction should take place within meaning-focused instruction, some, such as Laufer, have explored ways of complementing this kind of instruction by planned “pure” form-focused lessons unrelated to any other task and concentrated on one particular form. It is this kind of form-focused instruction that needs to be incorporated into the English curriculum for FAL, particularly in the higher grades where learners have the cognitive and conceptual abilities to absorb the theory. As a rule of thumb, in the lower grades there should be an emphasis on communicative meaning-focused activities that build confidence and relative fluency, while in the higher grades the emphasis should be on form-focused activities that build accuracy and sound standard syntactic knowledge.

Conclusion

There should be no apology called for in studying language as an object in itself, but it should not be studied as an end in itself at school level. There is nothing wrong with learners coming to grips with the internal workings of a particular language system in its standard form and coming to understand that form encapsulates meaning. Ideally, by focusing on the form of the FAL, the learner will come to master that language more completely and by doing so convey his or her message precisely. When learners have mastered the linguistic structures of their FAL, and they are both fluent and accurate, they should come to the realization that how they say something impacts on what they say.

It is, thus, difficult to draw dividing lines between such concepts as thought, intention, language and style. The relationship between language and thought, and how meaning is made, has been explored by many and goes back to Plato and Aristotle in Western thought. If our learners are not able to master the correct standard forms their meaning will become blurred and muddled. This is particularly the case with the written form of the language as without the help of paralinguistic aids such as gestures, voice tone, and other pragmatic and deictic markers the written words stand alone, unadorned, and usually in unrelenting black and white.

In our English FAL classrooms there should be far greater emphasis on form to promote accuracy. This may be achieved by adapting the present NCS so that it itemises the forms that should be covered in each learning phase as it has been shown that the meaning-focused methodology has not promoted accurate grammatical competence. Intervention is required to tighten and order the curricula for English as FAL at all learning phases as they are currently too vague and woolly. Teachers would probably welcome more supportive curricula that would help them to achieve the outcomes in a more guided, ordered and predictable way. Only by mastering the form accurately will our grade 12s cope with abstract, symbolic levels of thought needed in English in higher education and professional circles.

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Endnotes:


[1] Southern and Eastern African Consortium for Monitoring Educational Quality (SACMEQ). Retrieved from http:// www.sacmeq.org/about.htm/ on 14 October 2009.

[2] Education for All Monitoring Report (EFA) 2008. A UNESCO report commissioned by the Southern African Regional Universities Association. Retrieved from <http://www.sarua.org/?q=content/2009-education-all-global-monitoring-report-focuses-inequalities> on 14 October 2009.

[3] Pandor N 2005. Speech in parliament introducing the debate of the education budget, vote 15, National Assembly, 19 May. Retrieved from http://www.kzneducation.gov.za/news/2006/19-05-2006.pdf on 20 September 2009.

[4] National Benchmark Tests Project 2009. Report produced for the vice-chancellors’ association of Higher Education South Africa (HESA). Retrieved from http://www.hesa-enrol.ac.za/about.htm on 6 October 2009.

[5] Olivier B 2009. Why OBE has not worked in South Africa. Retrieved from http://www.thoughtleader.co.za/bertolivier/2009/09/05/why-obe-has-not-worked-in-south-africa/ on 23 October 2009.


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ISSUES WITH THE NEW CURRICULUM

Some comments on the draft revised curriculum for languages (CAPS)

Alison Immelman

Head of English, Westering High, Port Elizabeth

And so, yet again, the higher-ups in education have had another look at the curriculum.  Of course, and quite rightly so, the political and social imperatives remain the same.  We are, after all, engaged in building a generation of young South Africans who need to be equipped to meet the dynamic challenges of our Brave New World.  I am excited to be in a position of influence, and see my role in developing a confident, capable generation of young adults as a stimulating challenge.

When I consider the Home Language document, however, if I were to summarise my concerns about the proposals, it would be thus:  Although the document outlines the transformational obligations well, it seems that in the execution, the schedule does not fulfil this mandate.  My comments are therefore classified under two sections:  my perception of where the document does not meet the requirements, and suggestions about changes that could be made in order for it to do so.

Perceived shortfalls, and other relevant comments

1) I am interested that GET phase learners are allocated an hour more in a fortnight than the FET phase. This is good in that there is a huge backlog in knowledge that needs to be caught up in Grade 8 and 9.  (I haven’t taught in a primary school, but my understanding is that there are so many assessment tasks that need to be undertaken, that teachers do not have the time to teach basic skills.  Perhaps we need to take a step back in this phase, so that children do not arrive in high school unable to read, write, listen, or indeed file their notes, sit still and concentrate!)

2) I remain deeply concerned about the amount of time and the number of marks that are allocated to writing.  I do believe that writing is a skill that should be taught and assessed. However:

The ‘frequent writing’ that is envisaged, while noble in intention, is impractical.  Although the suggestion is that teachers do not have to assess everything the children write, the reality is that ‘if it’s not for marks’, it is deemed unimportant.  So much writing is envisaged that the children are going to be drowning in writing by the end of the year.  We need to remember that the home language only one of seven subjects!

I firmly believe that quality remains more important than quantity.  I believe that the writing ‘process’ outlined in the document is the route we should be taking.  This is only possible where there is less, better writing.  Without feedback, there will be no improvement, and writing will be for writing’s sake.

I also remain convinced that an essay “exam” is counter-productive.  It may, in the short term, allow the children to improve their marks, especially with the disproportionate mark allocation to the transactional writing, but this does not make them English scholars.  Are we churning out exam candidates, or the next generation of teachers, academics, journalists, novelists etc?

N.B:  I am not saying that we should not teach and assess writing.  I am saying that it needs to be accorded its correct and constructive place in the overall scheme.

3) There is a huge discrepancy about what grammar is purported to do, and how it is dealt with in the proposed schedule.  The document states that grammar should be “presented as a set of tools rather than a set of rules”.  For Home Language users, language should be taught with a view to communicating with and understanding the real world.  There is far too much focus on an outdated ‘technicist’ approach, when we should concentrate on what language is used, and why, and how to decode language that is used by others.  With this, I offer a five-year plan which covers this kind of language.  It allows for progression and growth of understanding (something that the CAPs indicates should be done), and, above all, it has no repetition, and excludes things that have no place in a high school first-language classroom. (Such as gender.  Surely we have moved past such things?!)

In addition: There is almost no allocated time in the schedule for the myriad language aspects that it is suggested should be taught.  Almost the only skill to which time has been apportioned is summary, which, it is suggested, is to be ‘taught’ well into Grade 11.  This for 10 marks in the final exam!  Admittedly, it is an important life skill, but this should be practised in all learning areas – which would then allow it to take its proper place in the Language curriculum.  A crucial aspect, that is emotive and manipulative language, is all but overlooked.

4) Several aspects, for instance spelling rules, should be done and dusted in primary school.

5) The ‘language structures and use’ column in the year plan includes a mishmash of quite pedantic language with no sense of progression according to age and intellectual capacity.  In several instances there are completely different skills grouped together, for instance pronouns and punctuation in weeks 9 and 10 (Grade 10).  This miscellany of language (with no allocated teaching time) implies that language teaching will be ad hoc.  This method was tried and rejected, and led to a whole generation (mine!) of learners who lacked basic language skills.  Children need formally to be taught rules before they can apply them, and understand how language use reveals attitude and relationships.

6) I notice with some alarm that the literature component will comprise 3, and not 4, genres.  The children are already not reading as much as they should/used to, and at least we were able to compensate a little in the English classroom.  Mary Johnson of Westville Girls’ High in Durban, a wise woman who was my subject adviser in my early career, suggested that we should be reading more not less.  After all, ‘literature is an obvious way to develop general knowledge in an increasingly skills orientated education system.  It allows for cultural sharing, and the extension of experience.  It enlightens, it provides pleasure, and encourages an active engagement in leisure time.  Importantly, it means being alone need not mean being lonely.  Through an appreciation of the issues raised in literature, we have the opportunity to become better human beings.  Seeing the written word in print will have a positive influence on writing skills’ (This is an extract from my reading policy!)  In addition, with only 3 genres, the one that will necessarily be a casualty is film – and this in a world increasingly dominated by electronic and visual media.

7) There is a great deal of oral assessment in an unrealistic time allocation.  To hear prepared orals for a class of 30 takes at least 5 hours (more if it is to be a useful session where children can interact and ask questions).  In addition, to expect the learners to prepare an oral a month is monumentally unfair!  (Remember that English is one of seven subjects.)  Unprepared oral ability can be assessed daily when considering how children interact with each other in the classroom.  It is an undisputed fact that teenagers can talk!  On the other hand, it seems a pity that there are so few marks allocated to this aspect when it is a fundamental life skill, especially considering the number of tasks included in the assessment guidelines.

8) My body shakes and my heart quails when I consider the assessment requirements.  I am sure that the designers believe that they have taken cognisance of the previous pleas of language teachers in – on paper at least – reducing the number of tasks to 12.  In fact the number in Grades 10 – 11 is closer to 18 – and more if we consider the unrealistic demands of the exams (indicated as ‘two’ tasks)!  The following realities need to be considered:

  • Each oral ‘task’ is made up of two separate assessments – i.e. 5, not 3 tasks.
  • Shorter and longer transactional writing is more than ‘one’ task worth of planning, administering, writing and marking.
  • The tests designated for tasks 4 and 10 comprise more than 3 tasks each.  A 70-mark language paper (including 30 marks of fairly right or wrong work) took me 10 hours to mark in a recent exam session.  An 80-mark lit exam took more like 15 hours.  Realistically the proposed test will take at least 13 hours to mark.  In addition, a 100 mark test takes 2 ½ hours to write.  We do not have this kind of time allocated to the assessment of one subject!
  • Between 7 ½ and 8 ½ hours of assessment twice a year during exams is an overkill (perhaps the 8 ½ hours allocated in the middle of Grade 10 is an error?).  It needs to be borne in mind that over-testing can be as harmful as under-testing.  I would suggest that a mid-year exam for Grade 10 could be made up as follows:
    • 20 – 25 marks of comprehension (tests reading and understanding; understanding of tone and intention; various levels of question and answer).
    • 10 – 15 marks of advertising (tests reading of graphics and text; manipulative language; layout and design)
    • 10 – 15 marks of stylistic devices and errors based on cartoons (tests language of the world; political and social realities; humour)
    • 10 – 15 marks of unseen poetry (tests acquisition of poetry appreciation, rather than ability to learn and spew out what the teacher has said about set poetry)
    • 25 marks of lit essay or contextual, (with the other option being included in the second exam, as well as being taught and tested when appropriate during the year).  It is unnecessary to test 2 texts – the skills are merely duplicated then.  It still means that each text will be tested at least twice.  That’s enough!

This combination of between 75 and 95 marks (to be written in 2 – 2 ½ hours) more than tests whether the children have learnt and can apply appropriate English skills.  It also means that there is no testing for its own sake, and that teachers and learners are not put under undue pressure.

The combination of questions can become more complex through Grade 10 and 11 until the end of Grade 11 when full-scale exams could be considered in order to begin to prepare the learners for the rigours of the final matric exams.

I have used this kind of combined exam at various times over my 28 years of teaching, and I am confident that my learners become capable, sensitive young people, equipped to meet the demands of the real world.  I have had letters from Rhodes University and NMMU complimenting me and my department on the quality of the student that we send them.

The writing paper makes me despondent!  Among other reasons included elsewhere, it appears to me that it is an entirely artificial exercise, not related to any writing exercise carried out in the real world.  It seems that its main reason for inclusion is to boost the final marks.  I don’t think that we are doing anybody any favours!  I truly believe that we need to reconsider the internal assessment of writing. 10 marks for a 300-word poetry essay is too little (compare 25 marks for a 450 word literature essay!).  The question should be limited to a single thematic aspect, which could be answered in 120 – 150 words.

The suggested time allocation does not take into account the realities of the school year.  I am concerned about the idea that we can complete assessment, marking, recording and reporting in 2 weeks!

I would love to hear if I am alone in these concerns!




IN MEMORIAM

It was with great sadness that I learnt last week of the untimely death of Mike Merrett of Evalunet. It was Mike who designed the bannerhead for Teaching English Today and assisted with setting up the website and training me to operate it.  A knowledgeable, cheerful young man who was killed in a motor car accident on returning from volunteer firefighting work, he will be sorely missed.  Our condolences to his family and all at Evalunet. His memory will live on in our striking bannerhead.

Malcolm Venter

EDITOR




BUZZWORDS

The Macmillan Dictionary Online provides interesting information about English words, including a section on ‘buzzwords’.  The latest one posted is clickjacking, which they define as ‘the malicious activity of taking control of an Internet user’s actions by making them click on hidden links’.

The new curriculum for languages includes a section on ‘neologisms’, so you might find some interesting exercises here. Or you might just be interested in reading more about word matters.  To access the information, you can send an email to the following address and subscribe to their newsletter:

The Macmillan Dictionary Online Team [elessons@service.macmillaneducation.com]

Or you can go the website for the dictionary itself for general information:

www.macmillandictionary.com

Malcolm Venter

EDITOR




WEB-BASED RESOURCES FOR ENGLISH TEACHERS

(1) The creator of the following website has made her resources for teaching English available to English teachers.  It contains some super material.

Go to: www.mrs-claassen.co.za

Thanks for your generosity, Sandra Claassen!

(2) Another excellent website is the onestopenglish website presented by MacMillan:

http://www.onestopenglish.com

It contains, inter alia, the following:

Grammar and Vocab (grammar reference, teaching, lessons; vocabulary lessons; fun with grammar)

Magazine

Teach support

Skills (lesson plans on listening, writing, reading, speaking and pronunciation skills)

Young learners (teaching children, teenagers)

Phonics

Methodology

Flashcards

MacMillan Dictionary online

Blogs

Forum

To get regular update information on this site, you can subscribe to their e-newsletter (onestopenglish.newsletter@macmillan.com).

Once you have downloaded a site, don’t forget to bookmark it for future use!

PLEASE ALSO LET US KNOW WHAT YOU THINK OF THESE SITES, AND TELL US OF ANY OTHERS WHICH YOU HAVE FOUND USEFUL.

Dr Malcolm Venter

EDITOR : TET




ENGLISH MATTERS

We have posted some information of interest to English teachers:

(1) Call for entries for 2011 English Olympiad

(2) Advertisement for a new English (Honours) in English Education at Wits

(3) The launch of English Alive I 2010

(4) A detailed analysis of Ian McEwan’s Saturday

(5) See the following website for super resources on English teaching: www.mrs-claassen.co.za


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